What activities do you usually do during the weekend with your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
Thesedays, we are busy because of each work. So, it is difficult to spend our time together during the weekend. However, we are effort to eat dinner together every weekend. When I was young, we used to go hiking and go fishing. I always looked forword waiting for the time to go activities with my family. Now, i miss that time. If i have a free time with my family, i want to travel oversea, or go camping with renting camping car. I have traveled without my family. So i would like to try to travel with them and make good memories more.
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher James
>>> These days, we are busy because of our own work.
So, it is difficult to spend our time together during the weekend.
>>> CORRECT
However, we are effort to eat dinner together every weekend.
>>> However, we make an effort to have a dinner every weekend.
When I was young, we used to go hiking and go fishing.
>>> When I was young, we used to do hiking and fishing.
I always looked forword waiting for the time to go activities with my family.
>>> I always looked forward waiting for the time to go, activities with my family.
Now, i miss that time.
>>> CORRECT
>>>OR: I miss that time now.
If i have a free time with my family, i want to travel oversea, or go camping with renting camping car.
>>> If I have a free time with my family, I want to travel overseas, or go camping with renting camping car.
I have traveled without my family.
>>> CORRECT
So i would like to try to travel with them and make good memories more.
>>> So I would like to try to travel with them and make more good memories.
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