What activities do you usually do when you meet friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I meet my friends, I usually go to Cheonho-dong. There are many things to play! Also me and my friends eat some delicious food there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ridoria! It\'s my first time hearing about that spot. It\'s nice to visit that kind of place once in a while to release stress and have fun. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
When I meet my friends, I usually go to Cheonho-dong.
>>Correct!
There are many things to play!
>>There are many things to play there!
Also me and my friends eat some delicious food there.
>>Also, my friends and I can get some delicious food there.
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