What activities don\'t you like to do? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually do not like soccer, baseball, and basketball, volleyball that are usually historic sports. I like activities like four square and dodgeball which are kind of childish. I don\'t like soccer and baseball because I can\'t kick a balll well and I am not the body for hitting and catching balls. I don\'t like basketball and volleyball because I can\'t jump well and hit heavy balls great. But, I love four square and dodgeball because I\'m slender and can swiftly dodge away balls. So, for these reasons, I don\'t like soccer, baseball, and basketball, volleyball and DO like four square and dodgeball.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Heather! Thank you for elaborating and sharing about the activities you like and don\'t like doing. Stay active and safe. I\'ll see you in class. ~T. Lyn
I usually do not like soccer, baseball, and basketball, volleyball that are usually historic sports.
>>I don\'t usually like historical sports such as soccer, baseball, basketball, or volleyball.
I like activities like four square and dodgeball which are kind of childish.
>>I like childish activities such as foursquare and dodgeball.
I don\'t like soccer and baseball because I can\'t kick a balll well and I am not the body for hitting and catching balls.
>>I don\'t like soccer and baseball because I\'m not a good kicker and I\'m not the type to hit and catch the ball.
I don\'t like basketball and volleyball because I can\'t jump well and hit heavy balls great.
>>I don\'t like basketball and volleyball because I can\'t jump high and hit heavy balls well.
But, I love four square and dodgeball because I\'m slender and can swiftly dodge away balls.
>>However, I like foursquare and dodgeball because I am slim and can dodge the ball quickly.
So, for these reasons, I don\'t like soccer, baseball, and basketball, volleyball and DO like four square and dodgeball.
>>So, these are some of the reasons I like and dislike certain activities.
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