What activities make you lose track of time?

2014-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I lose track of time when i clean my house. Suddely i want to clean. it is not my plan. the last time, i started at 11pm. so i had no choice but to slept at 3am. because, i don't stop to clean when i start cleaning. i think the reason is that i didn't clean my room for a lots of days. and korea has 4 season, so i have a lots of cloths for 4 season. when the seoson change, i must change my cloths in closet. so i lost track of time while i am cleaning.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! It really takes much time to clean the house. When I do, I can spend the whole day in doing so because there are just so many things to arrange. So when I decide to clean, I usually eat a lot first because I know that I need much energy to accomplish my task. T. JanE ^^ I lose track of time when I clean my house.>> Correct Suddely I want to clean. >> Correct It is not my plan.>> Correct the last time, i started at 11pm.>> Last time, I started at 11:00 pm.  so i had no choice but to slept at 3am.>> So I had no choice but to sleep at 3:00 am.  because, i don\'t stop to clean when i start cleaning.>> I can\'t stop when I start cleaning.  i think the reason is that i didn\'t clean my room for a lots of days.>> I think the reason is that I didn\'t clean my room for a few days.  and korea has 4 season, so i have a lots of cloths for 4 season.>> Also, Korea has four seasons, so I have lots of clothes for the different seasons.  when the seoson change, i must change my cloths in closet.>> When the season changes, I must change my clothes in the closet.  so i lost track of time while i am cleaning. >> So I lose track of time while I\'m cleaning.   

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