What activities with animals do you enjoy most? (walking, feeding, bathing)

2025-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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first, I like to lie next the my dog and I touch her stomach. second, I like to go for a walk around my house with my dog. finally, I like to smell the dog\'s feet

강사 첨삭

Hi, Julia^^
Thank you for sharing.
I hope you enjoyed your time with the dogs last weekend. 
_T. SHAY^^
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first, I like to lie next the my dog and I touch her stomach.
>>First, I like to lie next to the dog and touch her belly.
OR: First, I like to lie next to the dog and scratch her belly.
second, I like to go for a walk around my house with my dog.
>>Second, I like to go for a walk around my house with dog.
finally, I like to smell the dog\'s feet
>>Third, I like to smell the dog\'s feet.

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