What activity can you do when it is raining?
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What activity could I do when it is raining? First of all, I can fold paper boats and float them on the puddle. It would be fun. Secondly, I can play in a wet jungle gym getting caught in the rain like a monkey is playing in the jungle. That will make me feel like l’m in real jungle. Lastly, I’m not sure if this is one of activities I like looking raindrops on the window.
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What activity could I do when it is raining? First of all, I can fold
paper boats and float them on the puddle. It would be fun. Secondly, I
can play in a wet jungle gym getting caught in the rain like a monkey is
playing in the jungle. That will make me feel like l’m in real jungle.
Lastly, I’m not sure if this is one of activities I like looking
raindrops on the window.
>> What activity could I do when it is raining? First of all, I can fold
paper boats and float them on the puddle. It would be fun. Secondly, I
can play in a wet jungle gym getting caught in the rain like a monkey
playing in the jungle. That will make me feel like l’m in a real jungle.
Lastly, I’m not sure if this is one of the activities that I like, and the activity is looking
at the raindrops on the window.
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