What advantage do you believe entry-level applicants have when applying for jobs?
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I think the biggest advantage for entry-level applicants is that they can apply for a job as both a major and apply in different field.
Also, entry-level applicants will be able to respond more flexibly than others because they don\'t have job experience yet, and will be quick to accept work knowledge.
It is regrettable that Korea cannot do so because there are many qualifications to meet when applying for a job.
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You said it on point, [이름]!
Thank you for writing your composition once again... Keep on improving ^__^
Chammy
I think the biggest advantage for entry-level applicants is that they can apply for a job as both a major and apply in different fields.
Also, entry-level applicants will be able to respond more flexibly than others because they don\'t have job experience yet, and will be quick to accept work knowledge.
It is regrettable that Korea cannot do so because there are many qualifications to meet when applying for a job.
Also, entry-level applicants will be able to respond more flexibly than others because they don\'t have job experience yet, and will be quick to accept work knowledge.
It is regrettable that Korea cannot do so because there are many qualifications to meet when applying for a job.
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