What adventures would you like to go on in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m not adventure person.
I don\'t like new experiences, I like repeated things. And I tend to challenge when someone admits that it\'s stable.
But if I want to achive the adventure, I will buy my mother\'s car.
Actually, I spend money to drink a lot. So, I can\'t save money. But, thesedays I began to think that paying to drink is waste money and time. Then I try to save money.
My mother is using the car for about 7years, but car have not a rear camera. These days, all car have a rear camera. I look uncomfortable without a rear camera, so I want to but new car with rear camera.
And, I want to go to Switzerland. In the recent drama I watched, characters go to the Switzerland and the view is perfect. So, I want to visit there and take pictures a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework composition today. Your thoughts and ideas are really interesting and fun to read. I appreciate your efforts a lot. See you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I think I\'m not adventure person.
>>I think I\'m not an adventurous person. I don\'t like new experiences, I like repeated things. And I tend to challenge when someone admits that it\'s stable.
>>I don\'t like new experiences. I like routine. I tend to challenge people who say that it\'s too stable.
But if I want to achive the adventure, I will buy my mother\'s car.
>>But, if I go on an adventure one day, I will buy my mother\'s car.
Actually, I spend money to drink a lot. So, I can\'t save money. But, thesedays I began to think that paying to drink is waste money and time. Then I try to save money.
>>Actually, I spend a lot of money on drinking so I can\'t save money. However, these days, I\'ve begun thinking that spending money on alcohol is a waste of time and money. So this time, I will try to save money.
My mother is using the car for about 7years, but car have not a rear camera. These days, all car have a rear camera. I look uncomfortable without a rear camera, so I want to but new car with rear camera.
>>My mother has been using her car for seven year now but it doesn\'t have a rear camera. These days, all cars have rear cameras. I feel uncomfortable without a rear camera, so I want to buy a new car with a rear camera.
And, I want to go to Switzerland.
>>Also, I want to go to Switzerland.
In the recent drama I watched, characters go to the Switzerland and the view is perfect. So, I want to visit there and take pictures a lot.
>>CORRECT!
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