What advice can you give a friend who is suffering from chronic stress?
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I will suggest her or him to rest. And i say, “i have delicious foods. Eat the foods with me.” So i will listen talking her or him. I just want to do healing for my friend who has stress.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름] [이름]! Encouraging rest and offering comfort through food is such a caring gesture. Your friendS are lucky to have you.
~T. Jenna
I will suggest her or him to rest.
Correct, or
>>I will recommend that she or he takes some rest.
OR
>>If a friend is really stressed all the time, I\'d say he or she should try to rest more.
And i say, “i have delicious foods. Eat the foods with me.”
>>And I will say, \'I have delicious food. Eat the food with me\'.
OR
>>And I\'d tell him or her, \"Hey, I\'ve got some tasty/delectable food. Let\'s eat together.\"
So i will listen talking her or him.
>>While eating together, I will talk and listen to him or her.
I just want to do healing for my friend who has stress.
>>I just want to help my friend who is stressed by offering some healing.
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