What advice can you give to people who don\'t like to go out of their house?
학생이 쓴 원문
What advice can you give to people who don\'t like to go out of their house?
I advise people just walk around near your place
The best place is nature walking I want to go outside and walk I think about it while walking
Walking is change your mood
Is your place too hot?
Fall is coming up soon here
Have a great weekend 😀
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kay!
2. The best place is nature walking I want to go outside and walk I think about it while walking.
5. Fall is coming up soon here.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I advise people just walk around near your place.
>>I advise people to just walk around near their place.
2. The best place is nature walking I want to go outside and walk I think about it while walking.
>>The best place is nature walking. I want to go outside because I can think about a lot of things while walking.
3. Walking is change your mood
3. Walking is change your mood
>>Walking can change your mood.
4. Is your place too hot?
4. Is your place too hot?
>>CORRECT!
5. Fall is coming up soon here.
>>CORRECT!
Additional Note: Don\'t forget the period (.) when you write a sentence!^^
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