What advice can you give to those people who have vices?

2020-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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my solution have two things carrot and stick carrot project is pretty complex It’s a very easy and very difficult both Because we can’t help them actually Only we can do Just trust those people who have vice And only depend on how to change they are They Willing is most important keywords of this problem. So we just have to say \"stop this vice and you have to cure your vice, i hope so.\" to them very politely and time will solve the problem but sometimes as always, everything isn\'t to be 100 percent if some guy cross the line. unfortunately stick have to do it own job that mean is they will be punish and we have to control this vice with physical thing or legal things They will definitely fix them vice i think if we used two method both then doesn\'t fix it? i\'m out. and you sneak out of the room that in those people who have vices that mean is i give up. i want to use this word. hopeless

강사 첨삭

HAPPY FRIDAY!

Thank you for expressing your opinion about this topic.

Carrot and stick method to stop vices? Interesting. Thank you so much for sharing.

I hope we don\'t have to use this kind of method in the near future.

I\'m looking forward to seeing you in class today!

~Teacher Eve.

my solution have two things

>> My solution has two things.

>> I have two solutions.
 carrot and stick

>> Correct!
 carrot project is pretty complex

>> Correct!

>> OR: The carrot project is pretty complex.
 It’s a very easy and very difficult both

>> It\'s both very easy and difficult.
 Because we can’t help them actually

>> Correct!

>> OR: Because we can\'t really help them.
 Only we can do Just trust those people who have vice

>> Only thing we can do is just trust those people who have vice.
 And only depend on how to change they are

>> It will depend on how they want to change.
 They Willing is most important keywords of this problem.

>> Their willingness is the most important key to this problem.
 So we just have to say \"stop this vice and you have to cure your vice, i hope so.\" to them very politely

>> So we just have to say, \"Stop this vice and I hope you cure yourself\" to them very politely.
 and time will solve the problem

>> And in time, the problem will be solved.
 but sometimes as always, everything isn\'t to be 100 percent

>> But sometimes, as always, everything isn\'t 100 percent.
 if some guy cross the line.

>> Correct!
 unfortunately stick have to do it own job that mean is they will be punish

>> Unfortunately, the stick have to do it\'s own job, that means they will need to be punished.
 and we have to control this vice with physical thing or legal things

>> And we have to control this vice with physical or legal things.
 They will definitely fix them vice i think

>> They will definitely fix their vice, I think.

 if we used two method both then doesn\'t fix it?

>> If both methods don\'t fix it.
 i\'m out. and you sneak out of the room that in those people who have vices

>> I\'m out and you sneak out of the room from those people who have vices.
 that mean is i give up. 

>> That means, I give up.
 i want to use this word. hopeless

>> I want to use this word, hopeless.
 


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