What advice can you give to those people who have vices?
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HAPPY FRIDAY!
Thank you for expressing your opinion about this topic.
Carrot and stick method to stop vices? Interesting. Thank you so much for sharing.
I hope we don\'t have to use this kind of method in the near future.
I\'m looking forward to seeing you in class today!
~Teacher Eve.
my solution have two things
>> My solution has two things.
>> I have two solutions.
carrot and stick
>> Correct!
carrot project is pretty complex
>> Correct!
>> OR: The carrot project is pretty complex.
It’s a very easy and very difficult both
>> It\'s both very easy and difficult.
Because we can’t help them actually
>> Correct!
>> OR: Because we can\'t really help them.
Only we can do Just trust those people who have vice
>> Only thing we can do is just trust those people who have vice.
And only depend on how to change they are
>> It will depend on how they want to change.
They Willing is most important keywords of this problem.
>> Their willingness is the most important key to this problem.
So we just have to say \"stop this vice and you have to cure your vice, i hope so.\" to them very politely
>> So we just have to say, \"Stop this vice and I hope you cure yourself\" to them very politely.
and time will solve the problem
>> And in time, the problem will be solved.
but sometimes as always, everything isn\'t to be 100 percent
>> But sometimes, as always, everything isn\'t 100 percent.
if some guy cross the line.
>> Correct!
unfortunately stick have to do it own job that mean is they will be punish
>> Unfortunately, the stick have to do it\'s own job, that means they will need to be punished.
and we have to control this vice with physical thing or legal things
>> And we have to control this vice with physical or legal things.
They will definitely fix them vice i think
>> They will definitely fix their vice, I think.
if we used two method both then doesn\'t fix it?
>> If both methods don\'t fix it.
i\'m out. and you sneak out of the room that in those people who have vices
>> I\'m out and you sneak out of the room from those people who have vices.
that mean is i give up.
>> That means, I give up.
i want to use this word. hopeless
>> I want to use this word, hopeless.
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