What advice would I like to give to the old people.
학생이 쓴 원문
To live younger for old people, I think curiosity is the most important thing. The old people tend to be calm and interested in nothing. So, their daily lives are boring and everyday is same with another day. I heard from someone that aging means there is no new thing in the world to me. If the old people have more curiosities, they could live more actively. And the best way to have curiosity is seeing the things in another view not the ordinary view. Then, they will new aspects although they have seen the thing hurndred times. In this way, people can live young.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. Elderly tend to do nothing just because they\'re already old.
They want to take a rest and they don\'t already have that enough strength to do things, unless, they
try their best to work out. By the way, it was nice talking to you awhile ago. ^^
~~May~~
To live younger for old people, I think curiosity is the most important thing.>> For those people who want to live younger, I think curiosity is the most important thing.
The old people tend to be calm and interested in nothing.
>> Older people tend to be calm and interested in doing nothing.
So, their daily lives are boring and everyday is same with another day.
>> So, their daily lives are boring and everyday is the just the same day.
I heard from someone that aging means there is no new thing in the world to me.
>> I heard from someone who said that aging means there is no new thing in the world.
If the old people have more curiosities, they could live more actively.
>> If older people become more curious, they could live more actively.
And the best way to have curiosity is seeing the things in another view not the ordinary view.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
Then, they will new aspects although they have seen the thing hurndred times.
>> Then, they will encounter new aspects of life although they have seen it hundred times.
In this way, people can live young.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
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