What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would said to foreigner "Don't lift the rice bowl when you having meal."Because it is rude to lift the rice bowl when having meal.Korean people hate when someone do that.And I would said "Don't write down someone's name with a red pen." In Korea write down someone's name a red pen,it means die.If,foreigner or other people write down someone's name with a red a red pen Korean people will very angry.
<About Soccer>
My favorite soccer player is Naymar.He is called "Pelle 2" He is one of the popular soccer player in the world.But he injured his waist so he can't participate the Brazil Worldcup 4 semifinal.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
How are you doing today? I hope you are having a great time.^ ^
Thank you for the effort of doing your homework.
Oh wow! I am impressed with your essay you are getting good at it.
You actually did a good job!
Please take note of the corrections I have done for you.With regards to the use of your verb \"will vs would\". Will is used to suggest certainty and it is properly used in all persons, eg. \" I will tell her to stop yelling.\" While that of \"would\" it suggest doubt or uncertainty and in doing a polite request would is used, for example: \" I would be very greatful of your help.\"
Please be reminded of the use of your definite articles: a/an. \"A\", is used for all the genders like \" a boy, a girl, a woman etc. It is also used when it is followed by a word starting with a consonant like a meal, a school etc. \"An\", is used if it is followed by word spoken by a vowel like an aunt, an American boy, etc.
In addition to, a complete sentence always ends with a period. A comma is used to separate a word, phrase or clause from the rest of the sentence. It is also used to introduce a short quatation, maxim or proverb. Observe the tenses of your verb.
Oh well, [이름] I am pretty sure if you keep these things into practice it will help you a lot.
Continue to study hard and practice more for it is only in practicing that would lead yout o perfection.
Be safe always and try to have a blast of your time as much as you can.
What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners?
I would said to foreigner \"Don\'t lift the rice bowl when you having meal.
>> I would say to the foreigner, \"Don\'t lift your rice bowl when you are having your meal\".
>>OR: I will tell to the foreigner, \" Don\'t lift your rice bowl whenever you are having a meal\".
\"Because it is rude to lift the rice bowl when having meal.
>> Because, it is rude to lift the rice bowl when having a meal.
>>OR: Because, it is rude to lift the rice bowl when you are having a meal.
Korean people hate when someone do that.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: Korean people hates to see someone doing that.
>>OR: Korean people would hate to see someone doing that.
And I would said \"Don\'t write down someone\'s name with a red pen.\"
>> And I will say, \"Don\'t write down someone\'s name with a red pen\".
>>OR: I would tell, \"Don\'t write down someone\'s name with a red pen\".
In Korea write down someone\'s name a red pen,it means die.
>> In Korea, writing down someone\'s name with a red pen means the person will die.
>> OR: In Korea, writing down someone\'s name with a red pen would mean death.
If,foreigner or other people write down someone\'s name with a red a red pen Korean people will very angry.
>> If a foreigner or other people will write down someone\'s name with a red pen, Korean people will be very angry.
<About Soccer>
>> CORRECT [ no need for the < > mark ]My favorite soccer player is Naymar.
>>CORRECT
He is called \"Pelle 2\"
>>CORRECT [ observe putting a period at the end].
He is one of the popular soccer player in the world.
>>CORRECT
But he injured his waist so he can\'t participate the Brazil Worldcup 4 semifinal
>> CORRECT [ observe putting a comma after \"But\" and put an \"s\" on the word semifinal ]
>> BETTER: However, he had an injury on his waist so he can\'t participate the Brazil Worldcup 4 semifinals.
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