What advice would you give a high school student who is about to go to college?
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i come up two cases in my head when i got this question.
i am a realistic person i think my self.
one case is that the student has good grade in school.
in that case the student already had so deeper thinking or until now.
nevertheless that choice is very good thing.
nowadays also need something for own skill.
easily in the past adult said to their children that learn skills, that will be made rich or that will feed you.
in past Korea really common sentence.
but nowadays is not big different, just concept mean skills little bit changed.
past meaning is physical skill relatively but now meaning is kinds of software? like speaking another language, teaching skill, even eating skill like you tuber.
haha little bit far from topic, so anyway i want to say that these days also need skill physical or abstract skill.
so the decision to go to college is very good choice to learn own skill whatever those.
but second case is as already knew it. Bad student.
that case is needless to say NO
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Hi Will IAM,
Wow, this is a long response!T I guess you were motivated to answer haha.Thanks for giving your best always in answering my questions:)
-Rachel
i come up two cases in my head when i got this question.
>> correct
>> I came up with two scenarios when I read the question.
i am a realistic person i think my self.
i am a realistic person i think my self.
>> correct
>> OR: I think I am a realistic person.
one case is that the student has good grade in school.
one case is that the student has good grade in school.
>> correct
in that case the student already had so deeper thinking or until now.
in that case the student already had so deeper thinking or until now.
>> In that case, the student has already matured or has been thinking deeply until now.
nevertheless that choice is very good thing.
nevertheless that choice is very good thing.
>> correct
nowadays also need something for own skill.
>> Nowadays, personal skill or ability is also necessary.
easily in the past adult said to their children that learn skills, that will be made rich or that will feed you. in past Korea really common sentence.
nowadays also need something for own skill.
>> Nowadays, personal skill or ability is also necessary.
easily in the past adult said to their children that learn skills, that will be made rich or that will feed you. in past Korea really common sentence.
>> In the past, parents often told their children easily to learn skills that will make them richer or that will feed them. This was a common saying in the past.
but nowadays is not big different, just concept mean skills little bit changed.
but nowadays is not big different, just concept mean skills little bit changed.
>> Nowadays, there\'s no difference; the concept about skills just changed a bit.
past meaning is physical skill relatively but now meaning is kinds of software? like speaking another language, teaching skill, even eating skill like you tuber.
past meaning is physical skill relatively but now meaning is kinds of software? like speaking another language, teaching skill, even eating skill like you tuber.
>> Before, having skills means physical abilities but now it includes knowledge about software, language and teaching abilities or even eating skills like the one You Tubers do.
haha little bit far from topic, so anyway i want to say that these days also need skill physical or abstract skill.
haha little bit far from topic, so anyway i want to say that these days also need skill physical or abstract skill.
>> I am off topic, but what I want to say is that these days skills whether physical or abstract are needed.
so the decision to go to college is very good choice to learn own skill whatever those. but second case is as already knew it. Bad student.
that case is needless to say NO
so the decision to go to college is very good choice to learn own skill whatever those. but second case is as already knew it. Bad student.
that case is needless to say NO
>> So the decision to enter college is good to acquire more skills, but the second case is useless, so there is no need to say anything.
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