What advice would you give children today about their career choices?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have nothing to give advice to children. I would like to say \"enjoy every day and find something you can enjoy\".
If you find something you can enjoy, do it with sincerely.
And, you will find your career automatically.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework today, I guess you are not busy ow ad you were able to do this.
I appreciate it^^
Writing Task: What advice would you give children today about their career choices?
I have nothing to give advice to children.
>>I don\'t have anything to advise my children.
I would like to say \"enjoy every day and find something you can enjoy\".
>>I would say \"find something you can enjoy and enjoy it every day\".
If you find something you can enjoy, do it with sincerely.
>>If you find something you can enjoy, do it sincerely.
And, you will find your career automatically.
>>And you will automatically find a job.
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