What advice would you give someone who is very busy?

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I\'ll advice make the order something urgent to not in a hurry. 

>> I\'ll advise to do things in order, from urgent to things that can be done later.

Something urgent and important thing do first and not in hurry and something not important do later.

>> Do something that is urgent and important first and not to do something in a hurry if it\'s not or maybe do it later.