What advice would you give to a young person who\'s trying to decide on a career path

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What advice would you give to a young person who\'s trying to decide on a career path?

There are several path for career.
>>There are several paths for career
 First, set to define Goal of your career
>>First, prepare to define your career goals.
 In korea, a lot of job positions.
>>In Korea, there are  a lot of job positions.
OR: There are many jobs in Korea.
You cant matching it abou all of that.
>>You can\'t get it right at once.
 Second, learn to english and improve your skill.
>>Second, learnn English and improve your skill.
Whatever you get job, you have meet to forenior.
>>You must meet a foreigner no matter what.
So need to good english skill.
>>You need to have good English skills.
 Finally, have various of experience about your categories.
>>Finally, have a variety of experiences about your category.
It can help your gumption.

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