What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young?
학생이 쓴 원문
If you want to live young as you grow older, you must always be happy.
Don\'t rest because you\'re old.And always study, exercise and move your body.
Talk to young people and communicate with them.
You have to dress colorfully and spend money.
If we try to teach young people because we are adults,They will leave us.
Times have changed, and all genres have changed.
The past is just the past, everybody can\'t everybody do it.
If you want to feel young, even the elderly must be diligent.
I will advice like this.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for your advise. It absolutely makes sense. Adapting to changes will be very important. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
Don\'t rest because you\'re old. And always study, exercise and move your body.
Don\'t rest because you\'re old. And always study, exercise and move your body.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Don\'t stop doing things just because you are old but instead you should always study, exercise and move your body.
Talk to young people and communicate with them.
>>CORRECT!
You have to dress colorfully and spend money.
You have to dress colorfully and spend money.
>>You have to dress colorfully and spend money for yourself.
If we try to teach young people because we are adults,They will leave us.
If we try to teach young people because we are adults,They will leave us.
>>If we try to teach young people how to live because we are adults, they will leave us.
Times have changed, and all genres have changed.
Times have changed, and all genres have changed.
>>CORRECT!
The past is just the past, everybody can\'t everybody do it.
The past is just the past, everybody can\'t everybody do it.
>>The past is just the past, everybody can\'t everybody do it.
If you want to feel young, even the elderly must be diligent.
If you want to feel young, even the elderly must be diligent.
>>If you want to feel young, you must be diligent even when you are an elderly.
I will advice like this.
I will advice like this.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR This will be my advice.
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