What advice would you give to people starting in business?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I don\'t know about the business so that would not the right answer..
I think the important thing is to read recently trend.
It is because, trend is change so quickly.
When you start the business when some trend start yet, you are late. Many business already will show up.
So you have to predict trend and start some a business with good prospects.
To know the trend, you should search these days advertise or Youtube. You should be a trendly man.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thanks for the advice even if you don\'t have a business yet. I guess you will be a good business owner in the future, so learn more about how to become successful in this competitive world. ^^
~T. Maine
>> Actually, I don\'t know anything about business so I don\'t know what the right answer is.
I think the important thing is to read recently trend.
>> I think the important thing is to read the recent trend.
It is because, trend is change so quickly.
>> It is because the trend is changing so quickly.
When you start the business when some trend start yet, you are late.
>> When you start a business and some new trends have started already for a long time, you are late.
Many business already will show up.
>> Many businesses will already show up.
So you have to predict trend and start some a business with good prospects.
>> So you have to predict the trend and start a business with good prospects.
To know the trend, you should search these days advertise or Youtube.
>> To know the trend, you should search about it these days on advertisements and YouTube.
You should be a trendly man.
>> You should be trendy.
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