What advice would you give to someone visiting your country for the first time? 수업 녹음파일 (수업내용 녹음파일은
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Korea has beautiful scenery ,long history and unique culture ,like K-food, K-culture.
There are four seasons.
The transportation system such as bus and subway is developed.
Public transportation is so convenient and economical.
If you want to experience, you should plan a trip schedule in detail.
I recommend you to visit in spring or autumn.
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Korea has beautiful scenery ,long history and unique culture ,like K-food, K-culture.
>> Korea has beautiful scenery, a long history, and a unique culture, such as K-food and K-culture.
There are four seasons.
>> There are four seasons in Korea.
The transportation system such as bus and subway is developed.
The transportation system such as bus and subway is developed.
>> The transportation system, such as buses and subways, is well developed.
Public transportation is so convenient and economical.
Public transportation is so convenient and economical.
>> Public transportation is very convenient and economical.
If you want to experience, you should plan a trip schedule in detail.
If you want to experience, you should plan a trip schedule in detail.
>> Correct
I recommend you to visit in spring or autumn.
I recommend you to visit in spring or autumn.
>> I recommend visiting in spring or autumn.
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