What advice would you like to give to your old self and why?
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What advice would you like to give to your old self and why?
I did have regrets about my old self, sometimes I want to turn back to the past.
If I returned to the past, I will make dreams and I am trying to achieve my dreams.
When I was young, I just studied without purpose.
I didn\'t think about my dream what I would like to be something.
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There are things that we would like to change in our past. Sometimes we feel regret but often times, it helps us grow into a better person. There is a saying that experiences are the best teachers so we should be thankful for the things in the past.
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I did have regrets about my old self, sometimes I want to turn back to the past.
>> I did have regrets about my old self and sometimes I want to turn back to the past.
If I returned to the past, I will make dreams and I am trying to achieve my dreams.
>> If I will return to the past, I will make my dreams come try.
When I was young, I just studied without purpose.
>> CORRECT
I didn\'t think about my dream what I would like to be something.
>> I didn\'t focus picking what I would like to be in the future.
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