What advice would you like to give to your old self and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can meet my old self, I would tell him \'you have to enjoy your life.\'.
When I was a kid before, I thought everything seriously.
I think I didn\'t know how to enjoy my life and hang out with other people.
I was really shy about meeting new people and I was very quiet.
So I had no friends when I was a kid.
But now, I know how to enjoy my life and I\'m not shy and quiet any more.
That\'s the reason that I have a lot of friends now.
So I want to give the advice to my old self.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
There are things that we would like to change in our past. Sometimes we feel regret but often times, it helps us grow into a better person. There is a saying that experiences are the best teachers so we should be thankful for the things in the past.
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If I can meet my old self, I would tell him \'you have to enjoy your life.\'.
>> If I can meet my old self, I would tell him, \"You have to enjoy your life.\".
When I was a kid before, I thought everything seriously.
>> When I was a kid, I thought everything seriously.
I think I didn\'t know how to enjoy my life and hang out with other people.
>>CORRECT
I was really shy about meeting new people and I was very quiet.
>> CORRECT
So I had no friends when I was a kid.
>> CORRECT
But now, I know how to enjoy my life and I\'m not shy and quiet any more.
>> But now, I know how to enjoy my life and I\'m not shy or quiet any more.
That\'s the reason that I have a lot of friends now.
>> That\'s the reason why I have a lot of friends now.
So I want to give the advice to my old self.
>> So I want to tell my old self to enjoy life.
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