What advice would you tell your depressed friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I won\'t say to my friends \"cheer up\". If I say it to them, it might not be useful. Sometimes I just listen to them, it may be helpful. In addition, I will give to them my tip. Eat sweets and it make you happy.
강사 첨삭
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Here are your corrections:
>> I won\'t say, \"cheer up\" to my friend because telling that might not be helpful.
Sometimes I just listen to them, it may be helpful.
>> Sometimes, I just listen to them. This might be more helpful.
In addition, I will give to them my tip.
>> In addition, I will tell them pieces of advice that might help them.
Eat sweets and it make you happy.
>> I would also suggest to eat sweets to make them happy.
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