What age do you want to live to? Why?

2022-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to live in age 20. Because I can do all the things that I want because I am an adult. And also I think I can enjoy my age in this age. Because of these reasons, I want to live in age 20.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

That\'s an interesting answer! I also think we live our best lives during our 20s. Anyway, great job and keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I want to live in age 20.

>>I want to live at the age of 20.
Because I can do all the things that I want because I am an adult.

>>CORRECT!
And also I think I can enjoy my age in this age.

>>And also I think I can enjoy my life at this age.
Because of these reasons, I want to live in age 20.

>>Because of these reasons, I want to live at the age 20.

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