What amusement parks do you recomend?
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A fun-filled day to you Sir [이름]!
How are you doing today? I hope that you are having a great time at work.
Wow! I really want to visit those amusement parks. It is because I heard a lot of things from my students.
Oh yes! You are right, a lot of people are telling that Disneyland is a great place to visit.
How about the Disneyland in Hong Kong? Did you hear marvelous stories about it?
We can talk about it later in class. See you! I wish to go to Korea someday.%%
Teacher Nina
There are only two big amusement parks in Korea: Everland and Seoul Land.
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Everland is much larger than Seoul Land, but it is located farther from Seoul, so it takes longer to get there.
>> Everland is much larger than Seoul Land, but it is located farther from Seoul, so it takes a longer time to get there.
Seoul Land is located in the outskirt of Seoul, so it is more convenient and easier to visit.
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I went to Everland long time ago, so I do not have vivid memory of what kinds of roller coasters it has and how it layouts buildings and gardens.
>> Did you mean: I went to Ever land long time ago, so I do not have a vivid memory of what kinds of roller coasters it has and how its layouts buildings and gardens look like.
I have been to Seoul land several times.
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I visited there a few days ago to have fun with my daughter.
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Although we bought tickets for riding all the roller coasters, I did not ride any of them because I felt scared.
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When I was young, I was okay although I was not a big fan of riding roller coasters, but as getting aged, I feel more scared and dizzier.
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>> OR: When I was young, I was okay although I was not a big fan of riding roller coasters, but as getting older, I feel more scared and dizzier.
So I just watched my kid riding various roller coasters.
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I heard that Disneyland in the States is amazing.
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A lot of people say that it’s worth spending a couple of thousand dollars visiting there.
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I wish..
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