What an amazing kid!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, on the TV show I saw a kid who makes delicious food.
I was really surprised about that show!!
He was really good at making a Sushi.
Also, he could make diffrent type of Sushi.
Even some people was more surprised, because his Sushi was really delicious.
I really want to try it that how it's delicious.
One day, he made lots of Sushi for his friends.
Ofcourse they loved the taste of his Sushi.
Like this, I learn that some people have a ability for their own.
Maybe I have my own ability, I hope I can find it soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow! He does sound amazing. Don't worry, you will tap into you talents as you grow.-Teacher JM
Today, on the TV show I saw a kid who makes delicious food.
>>>Today, on a TV show, I saw a kid who makes delicious food.I was really surprised about that show!!
>>>CorrectHe was really good at making a Sushi.
>>>He was really good at making Sushi.Also, he could make diffrent type of Sushi.
>>>Also, he could make different types of Sushi.
Even some people was more surprised, because his Sushi was really delicious.
>>>Even some people were more surprised because his Sushi was really delicious.I really want to try it that how it's delicious.
>>>I really want to try it for myself so that I would know how delicious it is.One day, he made lots of Sushi for his friends.
>>>One day, he made lots of Sushis for his friends.Ofcourse they loved the taste of his Sushi.
>>>Of course they loved the taste of his Sushi.Like this, I learn that some people have a ability for their own.
>>>Like this, I learned that some people have an ability of their own.Maybe I have my own ability, I hope I can find it soon.
>>>Maybe I have my own ability too; I hope I can tap into it soon.
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