What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think It\'s really important whom I meet at that time.
One year ago I moved this house. I have a small garden in my house.
Until now on, I have never been interested in gardening.
But my next neiborhoods are interested in gardening.
And they know a lot about gardening and planting.
Whenever we talk about some plants and flowers that bloosom at the right season.
Automatilcally I buy some plants and I am interested in gardening.
강사 첨삭
Hi Soo Mi!
I think It\'s really important whom I meet at that time.
>> I think it\'s really important whom I meet at that time.
One year ago I moved this house. I have a small garden in my house.
>> One year ago, I moved to this house. I have a small garden here.
Until now on, I have never been interested in gardening.
>> Until now on, I have never been interested in gardening but my neighbors are.
But my next neiborhoods are interested in gardening.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
And they know a lot about gardening and planting.
>> They know a lot about gardening and planting.
Whenever we talk about some plants and flowers that bloosom at the right season.
>> Whenever we see each other, we talk about some plants and flowers that blossom at the right season.
Automatilcally I buy some plants and I am interested in gardening.
>> I will automatically buy some plants if I am interested in gardening.
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