What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days I\'m interested in soccer. My favorite team is Chelsea which it is based on London. I fell in love with the team because of Eden Hazard. I hope my team win a lot of trophys.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] U! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
These days I\'m interested in soccer.
>>> CORRECT!
My favorite team is Chelsea which it is based on London.
>>> My favorite team is Chelsea which is based in London.
I fell in love with the team because of Eden Hazard.
>>> CORRECT!
I hope my team win a lot of trophys.
>>> I hope my team wins a lot of trophies.
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