What and who are your major influences for having your recent interests?
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I’m interested in fashion because of Power English. After finished our book’s topic fashion, I searched about new trends through the shopping app. But there’s nothing special so I seek my closet and try to use my own clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
Regards,
Teacher Lexie
Recently, I’m interested in fashion because of Power English.
>> Recently, I have been interested in fashion because of Power English.
After finished our book’s topic fashion, I searched about new trends through the shopping app.
>> After finishing our book’s topic on fashion, I searched about new trends through the shopping app.
But there’s nothing special so I seek my closet and try to use my own clothes.
>> But there was nothing special so I searched in my closet and tried to use my own clothes.
>> But there was nothing special so I searched in my closet and tried to use my own clothes.
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