What animal best represents you? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Horse represents me most. Because I have heard that horse is fearful. But it is so big unlike its personality. Also, it does its best to overcome its fear. These features of horse are very similar to me. I am fearful unlike my appearance. When I go to the amusement park, my friends are surprised after listening to a true about me. Also, I do my best to overcome my fear. However, It is not easy for me. Someday, I want to ride the roller coaster.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Kimberly!
Thank you for doing your homework!
I find it fascinating that you relate yourself to a horse. I agree that horses are frightful, but they have this majestic personality.
I am surprised as well when I read that you are scared of riding roller coasters. Just know that greatness is on the other side of fear^^
See you in class!
~ Teacher Gela
Horse represents me most.
>> A horse represents me the most
Because I have heard that horse is fearful.
>> Because I have heard that a horse is fearful.
OR >> A horse represents me the most because I have heard that it is fearful.
But it is so big unlike its personality.
>> But it is so big, unlike its personality.
Also, it does its best to overcome its fear.
>> CORRECT
These features of horse are very similar to me.
>> These features of a horse are very similar to mine.
I am fearful unlike my appearance.
>> I am fearful, unlike my appearance.
When I go to the amusement park, my friends are surprised after listening to a true about me.
>> When I go to the amusement park, my friends are surprised after hearing something true about me.
Also, I do my best to overcome my fear.
>> CORRECT
However, It is not easy for me.
>> CORRECT
Someday, I want to ride the roller coaster.
>> Someday, I want to ride a roller coaster.
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