What animal do you think is the most scary? (ANSWER)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What animal do you think is the most scary? Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I think the most scary animal is shark.
Shark has a big and sharp teeth, and sharks are very strong.
Also, shark is a famous predator.
Among shark, white sharks are the most scary.
When they smell blood, they swim to the target very fast.
Maybe we injered at white shark\'s habitat, we will eaten by sharks.
So, I think the most scary animal is shark.
CORRECTIONS:
I think the scariest animal is shark.
Shark has a big and
sharp teeth, and sharks are very strong.
Also, shark is a famous
predator.
Among shark, white
sharks are the scariest.
When they smell blood,
they swim to the target very fast.
Maybe, when we enter
or swim at white shark\'s habitat, we will eaten by them.
So, I think the scariest animal is shark.
** [이름], you just have a few corrections in your homework, so that\'s good. ^^ Please, take note of them.
Speak with you tomorrow. ^^
---------T. Alexia----------
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.