What animal that I like?

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There are so many animals on the farm and farmers raise animals.

> Correct
I think chick is the cutest and lovable animal among them.

>>  I think chicks are the cutest and lovable animals among them. 
I don\'t like yellow, but I like chicks because they are so small and cute.

>> Correct
I\'ve watched a chick be born, and it was so amazing and I wanted to see it again.

>>  I\'ve watched a chick being born, and it was so amazing and I wanted to see it again. 

If I grow old and set up a farm, I will grow eggs.
>> If I grow old and live on a farm, I will grow chickens that lay eggs.
So I will hatch some of them into chicks, and some of them will be grown and exported.

>> I will let some of them hatch into chicks, and some of them will be fully grown and exported.