what annoys you about living where you live now?
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choosing one thing, i have to take a walk to go super market or gym for 15 minutes. because my town’s downtown gather in one point. i really don’t like that. but our town is safety in night. so i love that!!
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choosing one thing, i have to take a walk to go super market or gym for 15 minutes.
>> If I have to choose one thing, it would be the fact that I have to walk for 15 minutes before reaching the supermarket or the gym.
because my town’s downtown gather in one point.
>> My town\'s downtown is gathered in one place.
i really don’t like that.
>> I don\'t really like that.
but our town is safety in night. so i love that!!
>> But our town is safe at night and I love that.
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