What annoys you about living where you live now?

2019-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Noise annoys me about living where I live now. Upstair people make some noise in early morning on weekend. They are running loudly and play piano in morning. It is terrible to me TT. I want sleep until late morning. Sunday is only day that I can rest fully. But noise make me wake up early. But I can not complain to upstair people. Because I think that upstair people are happy while running on floor and playing piano. I dont want to disturbing them. So I wake up early in morning on weekend and go to exercise in gym. It is my way to clear noise issue from upstair people.

강사 첨삭

Hello D.S.!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Noise annoys me about living where I live now.
>> The noise annoys me where I live now.
Upstair people make some noise in early morning on weekend. 

>> The people upstairs makes some noise early in the morning and also on the weekends.

They are running loudly and play piano in morning. 

>> They run around loudly and plays the piano in morning. 

It is terrible to me TT.

>> It is terrible for me.
I want sleep until late morning. 

>> I want to sleep until late in the morning.

Sunday is only day that I can rest fully. 

>> Sunday is the only day I can rest fully.

But noise make me wake up early. 

>> But the noise causes me to wake up early.

But I can not complain to upstair people. Because I think that upstair people are happy while running on floor and playing piano. 

>> I can not complain to the people upstairs because I think that they are happy while running on the floor and playing the piano. 

I dont want to disturbing them.
>> I don\'t want to disturb them.
So I wake up early in morning on weekend and go to exercise in gym.

>> So I wake up early in the morning on the weekends and go exercise at the gym instead.

It is my way to clear noise issue from upstair people.

>> It is my way to clear the noise issue from the people upstairs.

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