What annoys you about living where you live now?
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Here are my corrections for you:
Noise annoys me about living where I live now.
>> The noise annoys me where I live now.
Upstair people make some noise in early morning on weekend.
>> The people upstairs makes some noise early in the morning and also on the weekends.
They are running loudly and play piano in morning.
>> They run around loudly and plays the piano in morning.
It is terrible to me TT.
>> It is terrible for me.
I want sleep until late morning.
>> I want to sleep until late in the morning.
Sunday is only day that I can rest fully.
>> Sunday is the only day I can rest fully.
But noise make me wake up early.
>> But the noise causes me to wake up early.
But I can not complain to upstair people. Because I think that upstair people are happy while running on floor and playing piano.
>> I can not complain to the people upstairs because I think that they are happy while running on the floor and playing the piano.
I dont want to disturbing them.
>> I don\'t want to disturb them.
So I wake up early in morning on weekend and go to exercise in gym.
>> So I wake up early in the morning on the weekends and go exercise at the gym instead.
It is my way to clear noise issue from upstair people.
>> It is my way to clear the noise issue from the people upstairs.
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