What annoys you about living where you live now?
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Here are my corrections for you:
Noise is problem where I live now.
>> Noise is the problem where I live now.
I have been living in apartment.
>> I am living in an apartment.
My house is in13th floor.
>> My apartment is on the 13th floor.
In 14th floor , A very loud family lives in upstair house.
>> On the 14th floor, a very loud family lives there.
They sometimes play piano or jump up in their house in late night, If then , Its hard to sleep well cause of noise.
>> They sometimes play the piano or jump up and down in their house late at night, it\'s hard to sleep well because of the noise.
I understand about upstair noise. But It is hard to understand of noise on weekend morning.
>> I understand about the noise upstairs, but it is hard to understand why there is noise on weekend mornings.
I want to wake up late on sunday morning.
>> I want to wake up late on Sunday mornings.
I need some rest on weekend.
>> I need some rest on weekends.
Noise in apartment is big issue in neighborhood.
>> Noise in the apartment is a big issue in the neighborhood.
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