What annoys you about living where you live now?

2019-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Noise is problem where I live now. I have been living in apartment. My house is in13th floor. In 14th floor , A very loud family lives in upstair house. They sometimes play piano or jump up in their house in late night, If then , Its hard to sleep well cause of noise. I understand about upstair noise. But It is hard to understand of noise on weekend morning. I want to wake up late on sunday morning. I need some rest on weekend. Noise in apartment is big issue in neighborhood.

강사 첨삭

Hello D.S.!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Noise is problem where I live now.

>> Noise is the problem where I live now.
I have been living in apartment. 

>> I am living in an apartment. 

My house is in13th floor. 

>> My apartment is on the 13th floor. 

In 14th floor , A very loud family lives in upstair house. 

>> On the 14th floor, a very loud family lives there.

They sometimes play piano or jump up in their house in late night, If then , Its hard to sleep well cause of noise.

>> They sometimes play the piano or jump up and down in their house late at night, it\'s hard to sleep well because of the noise.
I understand about upstair noise. But It is hard to understand of noise on weekend morning. 

>> I understand about the noise upstairs, but it is hard to understand why there is noise on weekend mornings. 

I want to wake up late on sunday morning. 

>> I want to wake up late on Sunday mornings. 

I need some rest on weekend. 

>> I need some rest on weekends. 

Noise in apartment is big issue in neighborhood.

>> Noise in the apartment is a big issue in the neighborhood.

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