What annoys you about living where you live now? Answer in 5 to 10 sentences

2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I\'m satisfied with my home. But sometimes there are something annoy me. A disgusting smell (even though I cleaned it) from the sewer is very hard to endure. My roommate is a kind person but it is difficult to keep clean our shard living space. I like to live in clean space, but he and I are busy all days, so it\'s a problem. And my neighbor run a Airbnb, so from time to time some tourist knock my door or struggle to get in our house. It is scary.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Thank you for making your homework. Great job!

Keep up the good work :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


I\'m satisfied with my home.

>>> correct


But sometimes there are something annoy me.

>>> But sometimes there are some things that annoys me.


 A disgusting smell (even though I cleaned it) from the sewer is very hard to endure.

>>> correct


 My roommate is a kind person but it is difficult to keep clean our shard living space.

>>> My roommate is a kind person but it is difficult to keep our shared living space clean.


 I like to live in clean space, but he and I are busy all days, so it\'s a problem.

>>> I like to live in a clean space, but he and I are busy most of the days, so that\'s a problem.


 And my neighbor run a Airbnb, so from time to time some tourist knock my door or struggle to get in our house.
It is scary.

>>> And my neighbor runs  an Airbnb, so from time to time some tourists knock on my door and struggle to get in our house.

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