What annoys you most about living at home with your family?

2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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whenever i go out to play with my friends, i want to play longer until midnight. because we have lots of stories to talk. but at the 10pm, my parents call or send the message to me. 'where are u? when will you come back to the house?" it annoys me. because my city isn't dagerous until the midnight!! but my parents have lots of worries to me. i understand them, but i want to stay more in the outside.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you! ~T. Elisha

whenever i go out to play with my friends, i want to play longer until midnight.

>> Whenever I go out with my friends, I want to stay with them longer, sometimes even until midnight.

because we have lots of stories to talk.

>> We have a lot of stories to talk about.
 but at the 10pm, my parents call or send the message to me.

>> But at 10PM, my parents would call or send me a message.
 \'where are u? when will you come back to the house?\"

>> They would ask, \"Where are you? When are you going home?\"
 it annoys me. because my city isn\'t dagerous until the midnight!!

>> It annoys me because my city is not dangerous even until midnight.
 but my parents have lots of worries to me.

>> But my parents worry a lot about me.
 i understand them, but i want to stay more in the outside.

>> I understand them, but I want to stay outside more.

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