What annoys you most about living at home with your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you! ~T. Elisha
whenever i go out to play with my friends, i want to play longer until midnight.
>> Whenever I go out with my friends, I want to stay with them longer, sometimes even until midnight.
because we have lots of stories to talk.
>> We have a lot of stories to talk about.
but at the 10pm, my parents call or send the message to me.
>> But at 10PM, my parents would call or send me a message.
\'where are u? when will you come back to the house?\"
>> They would ask, \"Where are you? When are you going home?\"
it annoys me. because my city isn\'t dagerous until the midnight!!
>> It annoys me because my city is not dangerous even until midnight.
but my parents have lots of worries to me.
>> But my parents worry a lot about me.
i understand them, but i want to stay more in the outside.
>> I understand them, but I want to stay outside more.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.