What annoys you most about living at home with your family?
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When I was young living at home in my parent house, I really like to watch TV.
>> When I was young, I used to live in my parents\' house and used to really like watching TV.
But my parent hate that.
>> My parents hated that.
But that was not best thing. The best thing annoying me was my sister.
>> But that was not the worst thing, it was my sister.
She and I were really really different.
>> She and I were very different from one another.
So when we were young, we fought every day.
>> correct!
or:
>> When we were young, we fought every day.
But when we are getting older, we become to understand each other and try to make and maintain good relationship.
>> But now that we are older, we understand each other now and we try to have a goo relationship with each other.
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