What annoys you most about living at home with your family?

2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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When I was young living at home in my parent house, I really like to watch TV. But my parent hate that. But that was not best thing. The best thing annoying me was my sister. She and I were really really different. So when we were young, we fought every day. But when we are getting older, we become to understand each other and try to make and maintain good relationship.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you! ~T. Elisha

When I was young living at home in my parent house, I really like to watch TV.

>> When I was young, I used to live in my parents\' house and used to really like watching TV.

But my parent hate that.

>> My parents hated that.

 But that was not best thing. The best thing annoying me was my sister.

>> But that was not the worst thing, it was my sister.

She and I were really really different.

>> She and I were very different from one another.

So when we were young, we fought every day.

>> correct!

or:

>> When we were young, we fought every day.

But when we are getting older, we become to understand each other and try to make and maintain good relationship.

>> But now that we are older, we understand each other now and we try to have a goo relationship with each other.

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