What annoys you most when you travel?

2024-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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What annoys me when I travel are hotels, restaurants, and souvenir shops in tourist areas that charge high prices. In Korea, people usually go on vacation to the beach or mountains in the summer, and since many tourists come at once, merchants demand higher prices than usual. So recently, many Koreans are going on vacation to foreign countries where prices are low. Because Korea is expensive, traveling abroad is cheaper than traveling within Korea, even if it includes airfare. On the other hand, what is more disappointing than annoying when traveling abroad is my poor English skills. When I travel abroad, I am more interested in talking to tourists from different countries and learning about their countries\' culture and history rather than going to famous landmarks or attractions. However, I was very disappointed that it was impossible with my poor English skills. So these days, I am studying English with a Filipino English teacher on Skype (a kind of video communication system).

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]! 

Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! 

- Kristine ^^ 

What annoys me when I travel are hotels, restaurants, and souvenir shops in tourist areas that charge high prices.
>> Correct. 
In Korea, people usually go on vacation to the beach or mountains in the summer, and since many tourists come at once, merchants demand higher prices than usual.
>> Correct. 
So recently, many Koreans are going on vacation to foreign countries where prices are low.
>> Recently, most Koreans have begun taking cheap vacations abroad.
Because Korea is expensive, traveling abroad is cheaper than traveling within Korea, even if it includes airfare.
>> Even with airfare included, visiting outside of Korea is less expensive than traveling within the country due to its high cost of living.
On the other hand, what is more disappointing than annoying when traveling abroad is my poor English skills.
>> However, my poor command of English is more disappointing than bothersome when I visit overseas.
When I travel abroad, I am more interested in talking to tourists from different countries and learning about their countries\' culture and history rather than going to famous landmarks or attractions.
>> Correct. 
However, I was very disappointed that it was impossible with my poor English skills.
>> However, I was devastated due to my poor English skills. 
So these days, I am studying English with a Filipino English teacher on Skype (a kind of video communication system).
>> Correct. 

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