What are 3 common fears and how can people overcome them?
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I think first fear is darkness, second one is loss, and last fear is death.
>> I think the first fear is darkness, the second one is loss and the last one is fear.
People already know how to overcome and death has to be received.
>>People already know how to overcome these and for death, it has to be accepted.
Darkness and loss are connected with death.
>> Correct.
However, death is another new life.
>>However, death is the beginning of new life.
Like 4 seasons, old turns to new and life will come after death.
>> Like the 4 seasons, old becomes new and life will come after death.
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