What are 3 objects that you value the most and why?
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What are 3 objects that you value the most and why?
In my opinion, money. love, and career are the most important values in my life.
Without love, I do not have energy to work hard.
Without money, I cannot enjoy my life.
Without career, I cannot get a sense of achievement and self realization.
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In my opinion, money. love, and career are the most important values in my life.
Without love, I do not have energy to work hard.
Without money, I cannot enjoy my life.
Without career, I cannot get a sense of achievement and self realization.
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In my opinion, money. love, and career are the most important values in my life.
>>In my opinion, money, love, and my career are the most valuable things in my life.
Without love, I do not have energy to work hard.
>>CORRECT
Without money, I cannot enjoy my life.
>>CORRECT
Without career, I cannot get a sense of achievement and self realization.
>>Without my career, I cannot get a sense of achievement and self realization.
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