What are 3 objects that you value the most and why? Explain in 3-5 sentences.
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The first valuable object is my cell-phone. Because it was bought expencively one and half years ago and if I lost it or it is broken, I must buy a new one paying lots of money. I don\'t want to waste money to buy a phone.
The second valuable thing is my exercise short leggings pants. There are some non-leggings short pants in some stores in Daegu. So I bought them in NIKE store when I went to Guam. If I would like to buy it in Daegu, I have to pay an expensive delivery payment. I have been trying not to wear out them when I wash them.
My last valuable object is the sofa which I bought recently. Because it is new one and it costed lots of money. So I have been treatint it very carefully. I put blankets on this sofa not to be dirty and scratched.
강사 첨삭
Hello there So Young!
Thank you for doing your homework!
I enjoyed reading your answers!
It is true that we must take care of our things to make them last.
See you in class!
The first valuable object is my cell-phone.
>>CORRECT
Because it was bought expencively one and half years ago and if I lost it or it is broken, I must buy a new one paying lots of money.
>>It was bought for an expensive price about one and a half years ago and if I lost or break it, I must buy a new one.
I don\'t want to waste money to buy a phone.
>>I don\'t want to waste money in buying a new phone.
The second valuable thing is my exercise short leggings pants.
>>CORRECT
There are some non-leggings short pants in some stores in Daegu.
>>CORRECT
So I bought them in NIKE store when I went to Guam.
>> So, I bought them in the Nike store when I went to Guam.
If I would like to buy it in Daegu, I have to pay an expensive delivery payment.
>>CORRECT
I have been trying not to wear out them when I wash them.
>> I have been trying not to wear them out when I wash them.
My last valuable object is the sofa which I bought recently.
>>CORRECT
Because it is new one and it costed lots of money.
>> It is a new one and it cost a lot of money.
So I have been treatint it very carefully.
>> I have been handling it very carefully.
I put blankets on this sofa not to be dirty and scratched.
>> I put blankets on the sofa so it won\'t wen dirty and scratched.
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