What are 5 things to describe yourself?

2024-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

First, I like craft. I like making something like small room using box and clay. I make small furniture and also design the wall and floor. Second I like green color, especially the grayish green. Third, I like people but introvert. I like to meet new people and learn about them but it\'s hard for me to spend many time with them and I need some time to refresh. Forth, I\'m hardworking. Finally, I hate challenging things. I like to stay stable.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름], 

Your thoughtful homework about describing yourself is truly commendable. I appreciate your passion for creating small rooms, designing furniture, and playing with clay. Your creativity knows no bounds! The love you have for the grayish-green color reveals your unique taste. It’s a hue that brings calmness and serenity. Being an introvert who enjoys meeting new people is a beautiful balance. Remember, taking time to recharge is essential.  

Your hardworking spirit shines through, and stability-seeking is a wise choice. Keep embracing your wonderful qualities!  

~Teacher Cathy 

 

First, I like craft 

>>First, I like crafting. 

I like making something like small room using box and clay.  

>>I like making something like a small room using a box and clay.  

I make small furniture and also design the wall and floor. 

>>I make small furniture and also design the walls and floors. 

Second I like green color, especially the grayish green. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Second, I like the color green, especially the grayish one. 

Third, I like people but introvert 

>>Third, I like people but I am an introvert. 

I like to meet new people and learn about them but it\'s hard for me to spend many time with them and I need some time to refresh. 

>>I like to meet new people and learn about them but it\'s hard for me to spend much time with them and I need some time to refresh. 

Forth, I\'m hardworking. 

>>Fourth, I\'m hardworking. 

Finally, I hate challenging things.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Finally, I don\'t like doing challenging things. 

I like to stay stable. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I like staying stable. 

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