What are important things to consider when putting up a business?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, when putting up a business, the important things are trend, busines location(palce) and owner’s interests.
Only when those things are consodered will the business succeed.
강사 첨삭
Hello Amy! Thank you for this. I agree, those factors are indeed necessary.
- T. Beth
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In my opinion, when putting up a business, the important things are trend, busines location(palce) and owner’s interests.>>> In my opinion, when putting up a business, the most important things are trend, business location (palce) and the owner’s interests.
Only when those things are consodered will the business succeed.
Only when those things are consodered will the business succeed.
>>> Only when those things are considered will the business succeed.
>>> OR: The business is highly likely to succeed when those things are considered.
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