What are other social problems that you have in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the difference between rich and poor is too great.
Even if I earn money hard, the gap does not close.
As elsewhere, it is becoming a world where money is everything.
Therefore, there are many thoughts that money can be solved if problems arise.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I think the issue in your homework is the reality. It is sad but it is currently the trend.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
I think the difference between rich and poor is too great.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think the difference between rich and poor is too big.
Even if I earn money hard, the gap does not close.
>>Even if I earn money hard, the gap is not close.
As elsewhere, it is becoming a world where money is everything.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Just like everywhere, it is becoming where money is everything.
Therefore, there are many thoughts that money can be solved if problems arise.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Therefore, there are many thoughts that if problems arise, money can solve it.
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