What are popular things people enjoy doing in your country during the weekends?
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What are some popular things people do in your country on the weekends?
Koreans mostly travel on weekends or eat out with their families. In Korea, there is a culture of gathering together to make kimchi in winter. My family is an exception, but other families make kimchi together at home and eat a variety of foods.
We see that such a culture is still practiced by Koreans in America. Koreans believe what they eat and how much they eat on a special day is important. LOL
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Thank you for this Lisa. Very well said.
Koreans mostly travel on weekends or eat out with their families.
>>> correct
In Korea, there is a culture of gathering together to make kimchi in winter.
>>> correct
My family is an exception, but other families make kimchi together at home and eat a variety of foods.
>>> correct
We see that such a culture is still practiced by Koreans in America.
We see that such a culture is still practiced by Koreans in America.
>>> correct
Koreans believe what they eat and how much they eat on a special day is important. LOL
>>> correct
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