What are some advantages and disadvantages in going for a vacation?

2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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During the vacation, I can escape from daily routine life. I can stop doing endless nagging my two daughters, doing some house chores and taking care of them a lot. But I can\'t enjoy myself 100 % on the sopt , because when I think of going back home and to have normal life back, I get annoyed for that monent. And also When I get back home, it takes a few days to get back to normal. I hate this kind of feeling. However, as time goes by, things that happened at the tourist site become memories. Life should be full of good memories.

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During the vacation, I can escape from daily routine life.

>>> During vacation, I can escape from my daily routine life.

I can stop doing endless nagging my two daughters, doing some house chores and taking care of them a lot.

>>>I can stop doing endless nagging to my two daughters, doing some house chores and taking care of them a lot.

But I can\'t enjoy myself 100 % on the sopt , because when I think of going back home and to have normal life back, I get annoyed for that moment.

>>>But I can\'t enjoy myself 100 % on the spot , because when I think of going back home and to have normal life back, I get annoyed for that moment.

And also When I get back home, it takes a few days to get back to normal.

>>>And also when I get back home, it takes a few days to get back to normal.

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