What are some challenges you think the next generation will face?
학생이 쓴 원문
Environment problem will be faced to the next generation. Because in our generation environment problem is considered important. Globally they are trying to overcome our environment problem. But it’s not enough. In the other side, rate of environments’ pollution is accelerated. If this state kept going, then we will leave big task to next generation. We have to do our best for environment not to go bad. But sadly eventhough we would try harder for our environment, it is inevitable to give environment problem to next generation.
강사 첨삭
You were able to describe the scary reality about our planet vividly, Jenna! I hope we can do our part to save the our environment.-Faith-
Environment problem will be faced to the next generation. Because in our generation environment problem is considered important. >> Environmental problems will be faced by the next generation because in our generation, it is considered important already.
Globally they are trying to overcome our environment problem. But it’s not enough.
>> Globally, they are trying to overcome our environmental problems, but it’s not enough.
In the other side, rate of environments’ pollution is accelerated.
>> On the other side, the rate of environmental pollution has accelerated.
If this state kept going, then we will leave big task to next generation.
>> If this state kept going, then we would leave a big task to the next generation.
We have to do our best for environment not to go bad.
>> We have to do our best for the environment not to go bad.
But sadly eventhough we would try harder for our environment, it is inevitable to give environment problem to next generation.
>> Nonetheless, even though sadly we try harder for our environment, it is inevitable to give the environmental problems to the next generation.
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