What are some characteristics of your personality?
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강사 첨삭
Hi! Yeong^^
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There are my strong personality and weakness personality.
>> These are my strong personality and weak personality.
First. Positive thinking, be honest, dreamer, humble, helpful, observant, active.
>> First, I am a positive thinker, honest, a dreamer, humble, helpful, observant and active person.
Second. Lazy, picky, lack of patience, impulsive, rash, thoughtless.
>>Second, I am lazy, picky, lack of patience, impulsive, irrational and thoughtless person.
All of those things are supporting when I doing something such as learning, meet other people, when I decide something and etc. I wish improve my lack of personality and I wish better than me before
>> All of these are connected every time that I will do something such as studying, meeting new people, making decisions and etc. I wish that I can improve my weak personality and I wish I will better than before.
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