What are some chores you do outside your house?
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There are many different things I do outside the house. So, I would like to introduce this today.
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I\'d appreciate it if you could watch it.
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>> I\'d appreciate it if you could read it.
First of all, there\'s a cleaning.
>>First of all, there\'s cleaning.
There are other things that this cleaning is done either by staying at school or doing one\'s own job.
>>Cleaning can be done either by staying at school or doing one\'s own job.
Or, we can create a program called \"One Person 1 Station\" and select the number of people to clean up this month. I clean this a lot.
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Why do I clean so much? The reason is because of my teacher. My teacher buys delicious food to good cleaning friends for a month.
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It\'s not just jelly or snack, it\'s chicken, snack or pizza. I clean a lot of things because you bought me a lot of different and expensive things.
>>It\'s not just jelly or snack, it\'s chicken, snack or pizza. I clean a lot of things because he/she buys me a lot of different and expensive things.
As above, there is cleaning representative of the housework I do outside the house. Thank you so much for watching this.
>> As stated above, cleaning is a housework that I can also do outside of the house. Thank you so much for watching/reading this.
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